LI: To use smart searching and write a Haiku Poem.
The above DLO showcases the Haiku Poem which is written by on a very famous Aotearoa Tale- How Maui slowed the Sun. I also added some pictures of Maui and his brothers catching the Sun to make it more attractive. My poem contains four verses and it was a little hard to form the poem as I checked the syllables side by side. I still had a lot of fun making this DLO and completing this task.
Wow! What a wonderful poem. Maui and the Sun is one of my favourite stories so it was wonderful to read your haiku retelling the story. Did you find it difficult?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Ms. Pryde,
DeleteI a glad that you loved reading my blog and thank you so much for an amazing feedback. I also loved reading the story of how Maui slowed the sun. Yes, I found it a little difficult to write the poem as I had to check for the syllables side by side but I loved to write this poem. Thank you so much for commenting on my blog.
I am SO impressed Sakshi that you condensed the story in to such a comprehensive version...
ReplyDelete...Māui's power and ability could never be questioned again, he had succeeded in taming the sun. From that day until this, Tamanuiterā has always travelled slowly across the sky.
Kia ora Ms. Collins,
DeleteI am glad you liked reading my poem and thank you so much for the amazing feedback. I really loved the story of how Maui slowed the as I had never listened this story. Thank you so much for commenting on my blog.